HI this is my Infernal Castellan
Sgt Smythe approached the strange dark armored dwarf noting the size and strength of the units about him, the rumors were true. Dwarves and goblins were working together! His garrison could not possibly stop them, he must stall them until the Prince arrived. But before he could muster the courage to speak, the strange dwarf began to bellow.
"I am Uthred Bloodbanner Goldgiver and Slaver. I am Dawi Zarr and I am your doom manthing! I hold no loyalty to Sorcerer Prophet or Hold . I come for your ore and your people, you are my cattle and it is time for the harvest. If you wish to live, bring me 3/5 of your cattle and your soft people or I will take it all, turn your land to ruin and leave you with but ash in your mouth. Tell your Border Prince he has but 3 days."
As the dwarf’s voice still echoed off the mountains Sgt. Smythe hurried to deliver the message though he felt doom was upon them all.
This is what I’ve got so far. What do you think?