The list will speak for itself. I think it’ll end up being a pretty fun gunline. I don’t see the need for the BSB with the strength of the list. Opinions are welcome.
It really looks like a standard dwarf gunline and close to nobody likes to play against this kind of army where there is just 1 phase: the shooting phase.
I would drop the magma cannon, the wolfraiders to take an other khan and i would take something to moove: bull centaurs, iron daemon, even hobgoblins archers.
pistol on the overseer doesn’t help for the stand and shoot reaction since the range is 12": you need naphta bombs: the range is under 9 so when the naphta bomb is fired during the stand and shoot, fireglaives don’t have the -1 to hit for long range. It doesn’t work with pistol.
Lists like this polarize the game which leads to extreme games against the clock - can they get to your guns before you shoot them all down. You might enjoy it but most people find it stressful and dull, even if they win.
If someone has a fast, hard-hitting army or multiple scout units/flying heroes etc you could be in trouble as you have few mobile counters. DE peg lords or multiple Tzeentch heroes for example will be all over your war machines straightaway as you have no-one to intercept them - and one-hit weapons like Deathshriekers are unlikely to kill them in time through the 3+ wards/charmed shields, etc, meaning you risk expending too much firepower on them while their army runs at you. And there’s the obvious Purple Sun ftw.
It’ll win some games but no friends and I doubt experienced tournament players will find it challenging. Its a game of movement, add some moving units - ID/Destroyer/double Tau’ruks to guard those machines.
Every Legion of Azgorh list I see is different, and that is one of the reasons why I love this army. Your army is very beefy, and don’t forget your prophet gets a look out sir from the warmachines, and/or the Infernal Guard. Might be a cool tactic to march your IG foreward, and when the time is right, fly your prophet up to your IG to start throwing out magic death.
and I doubt experienced tournament players will find it challenging. Its a game of movement, add some moving units - ID/Destroyer/double Tau’ruks to guard those machines.