Looking through the Nipponese one, it seems extremely well-researched. My only thought is that it reads a bit too much like a Japanese historical army, rather than a Warhammer army inspired by a real culture from history. Bretonnia is not just a medieval French army and The Empire is not simply renaissance German, for instance.
hey i found an army list on this website www.rgmw.org/fantasy/rgmw-wfb-IceDwarf.html - 66k. unfortunatly it has long since been deleted. anyway it took the choas dwarf army list and applied it to a group of dwarfs from the mountains of norsca that had fallen to chaos. The man who made it filled it with conversion ideas and the like. The reason i liked the lists was that you were completely free with how the army could look. For example in place of a lammasu he called it a wrymm of the north. it functioned the same and could be easily by the wyvvren orc model. This kinda got me excited becuse and i mean no offense, i hate what the lammasu look like and i really like dragonish things. Thats just an example of this did. i have a printed copy of the list and i intend to base my army off of the idea that he suggests. any thoughts???