Scion:
Heres my fluff so far peeps. In case you wanted a look. Please C&C would be much appreciated, wad ya think??
Scion:
Come on 8 people have downloaded at and still no comments. I’m dying here :(.
Thommy H:
Seems okay, but as an amateur writer with a literature degree you probably don’t want me to go into too much detail about how to improve it.
The content itself is fine - as valid as any other interpretation of Chaos Dwarfs, given that the official background is so sparse.
Scion:
Go on give me the detail, I want it to be as proffesional as I can make it.