Unearthed from the shadows of the old site, my on again, off again Western RPG is reborn, a grim take on the American Old West, powered solely by playing cards, no dice!
Welcome back! Nice to see this still being refined. I don’t have any text feedback right now (it will take me a while to read it through but I’ve not spotted a single issue so far), but I have some for the layout. The random tables are often split over columns and pages but they don’t need to be because they aren’t usually all that long - you should try to keep each table within a single column so that they are easier to refer to.
Hey, I figured you’d be interested Bear in mind this is the just the alpha rules. I’m not too worried about the layout. My graphic designer will be handling all that down the road. What I most, more than anything is a keen eye on the rules, its gone through so many iterations over the years I’m likely filling in a lot from my head, who knows how may revisions ago.
The goal is once the rules are done and ready to go it’s going to be printed up and published.